Esther Sylvester

Hey Skins! Here's Esther! First off, I would like to say that I loved the beginning of this chapter. The quote about funerals was interesting and it kept me interested. ...

This is chapter.2 of my novel, so it might be slightly confusing. I have the Prologue and Chapter.1 up as well, but you don't have to look at them unless ...

Here's Esther to review, as promised. Excellent job by the way! I love the setting and the characters. Here are some things I found: “What?” he asked, chuckling. This is ...

Thank you so much Skins! I will work on my novel as soon as I can!

(EDIT: I am really sorry to all of those whom I have not reviewed in a prompt time. There have been a few incidents in my life which have made ...

Hey Emily! Welcome to YWS! I'm sure you will find the people here kind and willing to help you out with any problem that you may have. The lay out ...

Hello Skins, I was wondering if you could review the novel that I am working on? It is a romantic fiction, rated for twelve and up. The chapters aren't that ...

These pictures are all quite lovely. I love pictures of the sea/ocean. I liked picture one for its coloring. It has a lot of different hues. However, it looks a ...

SETH(Sloth) I awake from my wonderful nap to hear the rattle and chaos of the floor under the floor behind me. Why was there noise? I picked to live in ...

To fizza, Gosh, I love all the books you mentioned! They are all on my favorites! It's a pleasure to meet you. You write sci fi? That's refreshing. Not too ...

This is the fourth chapter to my romance novel, The Greatest Matchmaking Challenge Ever. Please enjoy and reviews are needed! CHAPTER FOUR, The Not-so Grand Introduction. Alex’s expression while wai

May I join in? This shall be my first storybook join in ever and this one looked interesting! I'll take sloth! I hope it isn't already taken..If someone doesn't mind ...

Zibbie! This is my favorite chapter yet! I finally caught a glimpse with what the characters were really like. Great job! Here is something I noticed: Lizzie running out of ...

Hey! This was a very interesting piece. It was interesting because I don't normally read about gymnastics, so that is cool! The thing I noticed though is that there really ...

This little story is just to be random and to have fun! Rated 12 and up for some random violence. THE CAST! GIGAMAN FLUFFY PINEAPPLE MAN HAPLESS ORPHAN MEGA TOAST ...